5/02/2016

Rake 'n Bake

(What did Oscar-winning screenwriter Charles Randolph (The Big Short) teach me about writing? Find out on this week's Jared's Inkwell! -JMG)

Story Sent in by Barbara:

I was supposed to go out to lunch with Fred on our first date, but he seemed out of sorts. He looked around constantly at everything. When we walked by a certain house he strolled up the front walk.

"Is this... your house?" I asked him.

He didn't answer but instead grabbed a rake that was leaning against the house and started raking the leaf-less, grassy front yard.

"What are you doing?" I asked him.

"Time to rake!" he screamed at me.

I waited around for a couple of minutes as he raked the grass. He looked up at me and said, "Wait here. I'm raking you, next."

He carried the rake behind the house. I took off. Luckily, he never found me.

7 comments:

  1. When you change your mind halfway through a date, don't say your farewells! Just convince your date that you're a dangerous psychopath! It's apparently what everyone's doing.

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  2. To everything
    There is a season
    And a time to every purpose, under heaven
    A time to be born, a time to die
    A time to plant, a time to reap
    A time to kill, a time to heal
    A time to laugh, a time to weep
    A time to build up, a time to break down
    A time to dance, a time to mourn
    A time to cast away stones, a time to gather stones together
    A time of love, a time of hate
    A time of war, a time of peace
    A time you may embrace, a time to refrain from embracing
    A time to gain, a time to lose
    A time to rend, a time to sew
    A time for love, a time for hate
    A time for peace, I swear it's not too late

    **** I don't see ANYTHING about raking!!

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    1. You have to play the record backwards. Lord Chunky Horse clearly instructs you to rake your neighbor's yards and then their faces.

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  3. I'm with the Duck on this one. He pulled the old "I'm a psychopath with a rake" routine. Classic Fred.

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  4. I don't think JMG has changed Fred's name, this was definitely Fred Armisen.

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  5. He sounds like he has schizophrenia. I completely understand being panicked and just leaving without doing anything, but it would've been a good idea to call the police. Either he didn't take all his meds, or he's not being treated when he needs to be.

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