4/03/2014

Probably Better off Not Being Shiny

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Story Sent in by Monica:

Rob was in a fog for our entire first date. He was physically there but mentally someplace else entirely. I had to ask him most questions twice and he fixated on shiny things. I guess I should've been something shiny.

We split dinner during which I did most of the talking. Finally, curiosity overcame politeness and I asked him what was wrong.

He unbuttoned a pocket on his coat and pulled out a capped hypodermic needle. It was filled with a clear fluid I couldn't identify.

"Want some?" he asked.

I didn't, and I left immediately thereafter. I hope he's okay. And not out in the dating world anymore.

6 comments:

  1. How could you turn down an offer like that? Morphine on demand!

    Seriously though, good job getting out of there immediately OP. This guy was bad news.

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  2. It's just not a good date unless my hepatitis C gets a fresh coat. At least I can find "Rob" now that I know his actual name is Jeremy.

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  3. Rob's rebuttal

    "That date went great! I banged the incredibly hot girl I had asked out, fell asleep on top of her, and when I woke up she had turned into a park bench!"

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  4. @Wolfie - HA!!! my coffee splattered keyboard thanks you :D

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  5. Congratulations, OP. You really dodged a bullet

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  6. She should have SAID something shiny, then he would have paid attention!

    But seriously, he could have flipped out at her; thank god it didn't end badly.

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